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Wasnt that bad... You need to take your character and make a storyline with him. Then you can make some fight scenes.
Author's Response:
the fight to win
theres your story. be happy
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Ok, this is what I suggest: kick up the fps to about 20 or if it's already that high just make it higher because it was a little slow. Then, put a box or something around your text so we can see it better. Next, add some blood or something to give it more color. The guy's heads should be flying off and stuff instead of the guys just falling down. Last, make your replay button cooler. After you've done all this it should kick ass.
Author's Response:
ok great help thanks a lot.
i had the fps at 18 so i will bump it up
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